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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
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I feel like this sentance is missing a comma or could be rewritten:
"If a past employee breaches a confidentially and noncompetition agreement the past employee may be liable to the business owner, providing the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable."
"If a past employee breaches a confidentially and noncompetition agreement the past employee may be liable to the business owner, providing the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable."
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Yes, I would put a comma after the "if" clause (I would also use "former" rather than "past"). Here is how I would word the sentence: If a former employee breaches a confidentiality and noncompetition agreement, that former employee may be liable to the business owner, provided that the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable.
- Yes, I would put a comma after the "if" clause (I would also use "former" rather than "past").
- Here is how I would word the sentence: If a former employee breaches a confidentiality and noncompetition agreement, that former employee may be liable to the business owner, provided that the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable.
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Yes, I would put a comma after the "if" clause (I would also use "former" rather than "past"). Here is how I would word the sentence:
If a former employee breaches a confidentiality and noncompetition agreement, that former employee may be liable to the business owner, provided that the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable.
If a former employee breaches a confidentiality and noncompetition agreement, that former employee may be liable to the business owner, provided that the restrictions of the agreement are reasonable.
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