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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Strectch out its wings

Please check the following paragraph.

One day, I walked my way home. Suddenly I saw a dog lie on the roadside. I was so afraid that it would be dead, so I took it home and applied some medicine on its wound. Past a week, it gradually got recovery because I took a good care of it. Then, it stretched out its wings and tried to fly. At that time, I was so curious about its flying. Suddenly, it had a stomachache, and I took it to the vet. As a matter of fact, it gave birth to four baby fairy dogs.
  

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One day, I walked my way home. Suddenly I saw a dog lie on the roadside. I was so afraid that it would be dead , so I took it home and applied some medicine on its wound.

— Mister Micawber

  • One day, I walked my way home.
  • Suddenly I saw a dog lie on the roadside.
  • I was so afraid that it would be dead , so I took it home and applied some medicine on its wound.
  • Past a week , it gradually got recovery because I took a good care of it.
  • Then, it stretched out its wings and tried to fly.
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One day, I walked my way home. Suddenly I saw a dog lie on the roadside. I was so afraid that it would be dead, so I took it home and applied some medicine on its wound. Past a week, it gradually got recovery because I took a good care of it. Then, it stretched out its wings and tried to fly. At that time, I was so
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One day, I was on my way home. Suddenly I saw a dog lying on the roadside. I was afraid that it would die, so I took it home and applied some medicine to its wound. After a week, it gradually made recovery because I took good care of it. Then, it stretched out its wings and tried to fly. I was curious about its flying. However, it had a stomachach
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After a week, it gradually recovered because I took good care of it. ..
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