Straight forward sentence, I corrected but not sure PLEASE HELP

Could you please help me correct these sentences?

- I have the same car but in a different color and not black. OK
- LA is as far from SD as (from) San francisco. FROM is optional.
- I got both my id and passport done (on) the same day. written: leave ON, spoken: optional
- It takes me less time to do that than this. OK
- I have this many more things to do. OK
- The sexual act usually takes longer with someone you love than someone you don't know because of the intimicies between the 2 people. When he had a girlfriend the act took monger than when he does it with someone he doesn't care for.
- I don't remember the movie at all. OK
- Could you let me pass in front/before you as I'm pregnant and can't wait. (taking the elvator before someone)
- Don't ___ your life on acting. You might not become an actor. Then what will you do.
- I can't risking losing her over something like this; taking money off/from her credit card without her knowing.
- That's too big a raise to pass up. OK

Thank you