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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please check the following sentences correct? Thank you.

1. A new apartment which a novelist stays in keeps a dark secret in it when he experiences chain of scary events and most eerie, a headless ghost.

2. This film centers on a novelist who moves into a new apartment and starts experiencing various scary encounters, including one that involves a headless ghost.
  

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Here is my suggestion (I am not a native speaker): 1. A new apartment in which a novelist stays by hiding his scary experiences in dark secret; which is full of mysterious events and an eerie headless ghost. 2.

— Mizanur

  • Here is my suggestion (I am not a native speaker): 1.
  • A new apartment in which a novelist stays by hiding his scary experiences in dark secret; which is full of mysterious events and an eerie headless ghost.
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  • This film centers around a novelist who moves into a new apartment and starts experiencing various scary encounters, including the one that involves a headless ghost.
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Here is my suggestion (I am not a native speaker):

1. A new apartment in which a novelist stays by hiding his scary experiences in dark secret; which is full of mysterious events and an eerie headless ghost.

2. This film centers around a novelist who moves into a new apartment and starts experiencing various scary encounters, including the one t
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Thank you Mizanur. I would greatly appreciate if this proofread by teechr.
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Hi teechr, could you please proofread this for me. Thanks in advance.
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