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Sunny123 Posted 9 years ago
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stock exchange

Hello everyone. Please tell me your idea about the following. Make any changes if you can say that in a better way.

I am Smaeel Keshtkar, a PHD student in Financial engineering at Rasht Azad university. I have been working as a Stock market expert in Vosooghe Amin security company for about five years. I also have been working as a Bourse broker since 1390 in Bahman security company. Considering to be busy in Stock market for many years, I intend to study financial engineering to get a better knowledge for Financial instruments and take a part in developing these instruments in Tehran stock exchange.

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As a start, are you really more than 627 years old? Why all the text colors?

— AlpheccaStars

  • As a start, are you really more than 627 years old?
  • Why all the text colors?
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As a start, are you really more than 627 years old?

Why all the text colors?
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AlpheccaStarsAs a start, are you really more than 627 years old?
No, I'm not more than 627 years old but my calendar system is different from yours. We are in the year of 1395 now in my calendar system.
AlpheccaStarsWhy all the text colors?
Not a particular reason for that I just thought people can correct it easier if they
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sunny123Not a particular reason for that I just thought people can correct it easier if they are in different colors.
They are just more distracting.
sunny123my calendar system is different from yours. We are in the year of 1395 now in my calendar system.
When you post dates from a non-western calendar in an English forum,
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The highlighted areas have problems.

I am Smaeel Keshtkar, a PHD student in Financial engineering at Rasht Azad university. I have been working as a Stock market expert in Vosooghe Amin security
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AlpheccaStarsThe highlighted areas have problems.I am Smaeel Keshtkar, a PHD student in Financial engineering at Rasht Azad university. I have been working as a Stock market expert in Vosooghe Amin security company for about five years. I also have been working as a Bourse broker since 1390 in Bahman security company. Considering to be busy in Stock market for many years,
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Most of your errors are capitalization errors.
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