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Still the french girl...
is this sentence good english ?( I had to use the words "as soon as" and " on account of".)
"After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town and as soon as they see each other, they feel respect and friendship on account of both share the same viewpoints. "
thank you !
merci!
"After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town and as soon as they see each other, they feel respect and friendship on account of both share the same viewpoints. "
thank you !
merci!
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Hi French girl, You need to define 'he' and 'they', otherwise you leave the reader confused. "After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town. "
- Hi French girl, You need to define 'he' and 'they', otherwise you leave the reader confused.
- "After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town.
- "
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Hi French girl,
You need to define 'he' and 'they', otherwise you leave the reader confused.
"After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town. As soon as they see each other, they feel respect and friendship on account of their shared viewpoints."
You need to define 'he' and 'they', otherwise you leave the reader confused.
"After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town. As soon as they see each other, they feel respect and friendship on account of their shared viewpoints."
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thank you very much
(he= the journalist
they= biko + the journalist)
(he= the journalist
they= biko + the journalist)
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