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1688328 Posted 16 years ago
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1. In chinese history, the First Sino-Japanese was an undoubtedly watershed moment and an defining new era.

2.In chinese history, the First Sino-Japanese was an undoubtedly watershed with defining new moment.

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No. There are several things wrong with both sentences. " I assume you accidentally omitted the word "war".

  • No.
  • There are several things wrong with both sentences.
  • " I assume you accidentally omitted the word "war".
  • Putting "In Chinese history" at the start is not wrong in itself, but once I'd fiddled with the rest of the sentence it seemed better at the end.
  • Various capitalisation styles seem to be used for "First Sino-Japanese War".
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No. There are several things wrong with both sentences. You can say:

"The First Sino-Japanese War was undoubtedly a watershed and a defining moment in Chinese history."



I assume you accidentally omitted the word "war". Putting "In Chinese history" at the start is not wrong in itself, but once I'd fiddled with the rest of the sentence it seemed better at the end. Variou

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