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Vasuarm Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Sticking to Colors
Hi, please correct the following sentences. Thank you. In this connection, I'm really thankful to the Forum for having correctted many of my posts. I also admire and appreciate your correction as this is done without damaging my writing style.
"It’s true that her ‘give-me-a-pinch’ and ‘get-bouts- of-blows’ stance either scale up or scale down her image in the eyes of public many a time. But, she never gives a damn to her image and goes on sticking to her colors for a cause true to her heart. Nailing colors to the mast has been her forte and she always revels in wadding through dark seas unmindful of its depth and the roaring waves. She may look adamant and has authoritarian streaks in her."
"It’s true that her ‘give-me-a-pinch’ and ‘get-bouts- of-blows’ stance either scale up or scale down her image in the eyes of public many a time. But, she never gives a damn to her image and goes on sticking to her colors for a cause true to her heart. Nailing colors to the mast has been her forte and she always revels in wadding through dark seas unmindful of its depth and the roaring waves. She may look adamant and has authoritarian streaks in her."
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"It's true that her 'give-me-a-pinch' and 'get-bouts-of-blows' stance many a time either scales up or scales down her image in the eyes of the public. " - This is what you wrote with some minor grammatical revisions. The words "but" and "yet" mean essentially the same thing, but I for one think I would go with "yet" if I were writing this.
- "It's true that her 'give-me-a-pinch' and 'get-bouts-of-blows' stance many a time either scales up or scales down her image in the eyes of the public.
- " - This is what you wrote with some minor grammatical revisions.
- The words "but" and "yet" mean essentially the same thing, but I for one think I would go with "yet" if I were writing this.
- "She may look adamant and has authorian streaks in her" - I'm not sure what you meant by this sentence.
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"It's true that her 'give-me-a-pinch' and 'get-bouts-of-blows' stance many a time either scales up or scales down her image in the eyes of the public. But/Yet she never gives a **** about her image and goes on sticking to her colors for a cause true to her heart." - This is what you wrote with some minor grammatical revisions. The words "but" and "yet" mean essentially the same thing, but I for
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