Statement of purpose

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I have been born and brought up in the culturally rich country of India in the capital state where I have not only grown in the traditional sense but have learnt important life lessons which I have implemented through. I have been fortunate enough to study in one of the best school in the country –Delhi public school, R.K. Puram where I have been exposed to influential teachers and students from various different backgrounds from whom I have learnt and with whom I have grown. More than peers and friends it has been my family who have supported my decisions and encouraged me to reach my full potential.



I have been a good student at school, actively involved in extracurricular activates namely dancing and singing. As a member if the western music club I have participated and represented my school in various inter and intra school competitions.



Growing up I was taught mathematics by my mother because of whom I developed an interest and passion for the subject. During the initial stages I was not very efficient in the subject but I perceived this as a challenge and scored a 95% in my class tenth state examination. It was during this time I realized that hard work and dedication were a necessary key to success.



After completing my high school education I sought admission in Delhi University wherein I got the course of my choice that of BSC hons. Mathematics. I immediately connected to my subjects, analysis, algebra, calculus, and differential equations. Though the first year of college was a tough transition, moreover the university guidelines and changed and a new approach had been implemented. Despite these changes where almost half the students failed to get through to the next year I managed a second division. This motivated me to apply myself more and to do better.



Mathematics to me is a logical, analytic and a powerful tool in understanding the various economic aspects of life. I derive great satisfaction from solving problems and applying myself in a rational manner.



The reason why I want to pursue my further education in MSC finance is to gain knowledge in the field of investment management, financial analysis and risk management. I want to learn more about the current developments and techniques in finance and wish to acquire experience in the area of financial analysis, a master s will not only help me theoretical understanding but also help me develop practical and research skills relating to the core areas of financial accounting.



Studying in the U.K. interests me as there are greater prospects available to me in terms of education. I would be exposed to a new culture which will enable me to mature as a human being. Also I would have the opportunity to learn from an outstanding faculty.