Statement of Purpose

Hi,
I have to write for my university a motivation letter, but I don't know if the grammar is correct. Can you please give your own feedback?
Dear Sir or Madam,
with this letter, I try to make sure, why a study visit abroad in the is for my personal further development an important step.
When I am nearly half a year far away from my familiar everyday life and from known persons, it’s an alteration, by for every people, who have had already this experience it was a gain, which they won’t miss.
In I have contact with other people, customs and cultures, which can improve my life experience. I am in direct contact with students from different countries to exchange views on technical and cultural matters. I can compare different cultures and set parallels. The has political and societal an unprecedented position and aura, which I can only fell, when I am in this country. I notice explicit, how other people think and fell and I will learn therewith in working life better to make toward other people.
English is the most important universal language and in future by the forge ahead globalization it will gain even more importance. The governing of the English language verbal and written will be nowadays, from every international acting company, as skill preconditioned. This language is particularly to mechanical engineering an essential part, because calculation programs and design programs are partly only in English available. The business fluent knowledge of the English language is for me indispensable.
I have made during my school days language study travels to and , but these language study travels aren’t comparable with the duration of two terms at a study at . For my life it’s also helpful, when I can handle not only the English from school in word and in writing, but also can communicate with native speakers.
Also for the subsequent occupational career a study visit in is very useful. When I have to go in future during working life abroad, it’s clearly easier for me, when I have been spend time abroad. I get an acquaintance of the language, which I only can win abroad.

The public university which is one of the oldest existing universities in the system is best known for its engineering and it proffers an excellent training. Also has the university a large endowment which I as student can only profit. I can attend at the lectures, which aren’t provided at the Munich University of Applied Sciences at this extent.
But not only the study at the is a huge expansion of my horizon, but also the planning, my own initiative. From organizational matters at the candidacy to the house hunting in , I have to follow up with and with the . I have to manage everyday life and so I become still flexible.


You can see a study in the is an enrichment of my live and a profit, which I will do without fail during my study. My own personality will be shaped intensive and my knowledge of the English language will be improved relevant. I hope this writing makes clear, that a study at means a lot to me.

Yours faithfully,