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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Starting a narration

How can we start the description or narration of a video clipping ?

1. As the movie began we could see a man running on the terrace......

2. As the movie begins we can see a man running on the terrace.......

3. The movie opens with a man running on the terrace........

Please suggest some other lines to start the narration.
  

Top answer

I prefer #3. There is no reason to note that the movie is opening if the description is the first thing to be read. Several web sites offer sample movie scripts that writers have posted hoping to create interest.

  • I prefer #3.
  • There is no reason to note that the movie is opening if the description is the first thing to be read.
  • Several web sites offer sample movie scripts that writers have posted hoping to create interest.
  • I suggest going to one of those sites and reading a script or two to learn the format.
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I prefer #3.
There is no reason to note that the movie is opening if the description is the first thing to be read.
Several web sites offer sample movie scripts that writers have posted hoping to create interest.
I suggest going to one of those sites and reading a script or two to learn the format.

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