Would it look clumsy to start multiple paragraphs in a story, none of which are consecutive, with the same word/words - all of which are separated by at least one other paragraph.
"After all, it was nothing"
"After playing for a year"
"After all, I knew"
"After I finally overcame"
The first two are the closest together and are only separated by a paragraph that's a sentence long. That being said, not sure any readers would notice.
Thanks!
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I have a feeling that it would bother you more than most readers. "
— Philip
I have a feeling that it would bother you more than most readers.
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