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Daedalus7 Posted 20 years ago
stars
The stars were hanging above
like bulbs in an opaque ceiling
the moon was disappearing
and I knew I was in love
Cos there's no star
that outshines your beauty
you're a girl so pretty
that you shine from afar
Take my hands, the moment is soft
the stars are fading and falling
the world is stopping and darkening
of your love I can't get enough
For Yolanda
like bulbs in an opaque ceiling
the moon was disappearing
and I knew I was in love
Cos there's no star
that outshines your beauty
you're a girl so pretty
that you shine from afar
Take my hands, the moment is soft
the stars are fading and falling
the world is stopping and darkening
of your love I can't get enough
For Yolanda
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I like these lines: The stars were hanging above like bulbs in an opaque ceiling the moment is soft The rest of the poem is mush. Like an overripe fruit, sickly sweet but too soft to eat, it should be discarded.
- I like these lines: The stars were hanging above like bulbs in an opaque ceiling the moment is soft The rest of the poem is mush.
- Like an overripe fruit, sickly sweet but too soft to eat, it should be discarded.
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I like these lines:
The stars were hanging above
like bulbs in an opaque ceiling
the moment is soft
The rest of the poem is mush. Like an overripe fruit, sickly sweet but too soft to eat, it should be discarded.
The stars were hanging above
like bulbs in an opaque ceiling
the moment is soft
The rest of the poem is mush. Like an overripe fruit, sickly sweet but too soft to eat, it should be discarded.
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