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Anita_a Posted 22 years ago

Stand apart!

Come to think of it...
All the people that
had sat in that
place before
you did.
All the hands that
touched the flower is
in your
hand now.
All the things that
you saw today were
seen yesterday
by millions.
All the places that
you visited were already
visited by
many others.

Come to think of it...
what is it that
you did or will
do that will make
you to stand
apart from
your fellow
human beings?
Just be good to
them and do good
to them.
That is all
there is
to it.
  

Top answer

U know, this is one of my favorite poems written by me of course.... Otherwise, I love shakespears' sonnets and emily dickonson's poems

  • U know, this is one of my favorite poems written by me of course....
  • Otherwise, I love shakespears' sonnets and emily dickonson's poems
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U know, this is one of my favorite poems written by me of course.... Otherwise, I love shakespears' sonnets and emily dickonson's poems
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I really love poems, they really are from the heart. I had seen something so romantic today in the sky when someone wrote I Love You. It really touched my heart.
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Hi,
I have gone through each one of your Poems , they are awesome, Great . Keep it up.
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Thanks Nav.Here's one more..

When I saw you this morning
wearing my favourite dress
I thought that u cared for me.

When I saw u smiling beautifully
Making my heart skip a beat
I thought that u liked me.

When You took my hand into yours
looking deep into my eyes
I thought that u adored me

When u gently brushed your lips
Aga
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0 This is an interesting one. I just had a couple of small thoughts: 02br
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0 Thanks Mr.P. How about this with the changes? 02br
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00All the people that 02br
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00in your 02br
00hand now. 02br
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0 Hello Anita 02br
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0 Come to think of it... 02br
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00had sat in that 02br
00place before 02br
00you did. 02br
00All the hands that 02br
00touched the flower is 02br
00in your 02br
00hand now. 02br
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