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Mamatha1986 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Spouse Visa sporship letter
hi Senior members.,
I have to apply my spouse visa, so i need to write a letter for show "Evidence letter that I have a genuine and continuing relationship with my partner"
so please chek my below letter and correct any grammer mistakes and add some more lines to show our relationship is genuine.
Marriages are made in Heaven. They are only celebrated on earth. In the same vein, it can be said that the almighty has already fixed the pairs - they are only to be discovered.
I met my wife Shira at one of my cousin's marriage in August 2006.She came to marriage with her parents. I was seen Shira in the marriage and I can simple say that love at first sight.
After my cousin marriage we met again in my cousin’s marriage reception party, my cousin introduced me to her first time and that was the first day I spoken with her and we talked about normal matters that for several hours. We exchanged our mobile numbers that night.
I called to her my mobile everyday and talked on phone several hours everyday.
One day I asked to meet personally and finally We met first time in the coffee shop and we went to Village movies,I was in love since the first time we talked or I guess maybe I've even loved her before we talked for first time. Then for next few days we were the last people in the coffee shops which open till .
After first met we met again twice before I return to US in October 2006. after coming back to US I called her almost 3,4 times a week.
Shira is warm, loving, kind and most of all, she is really funny and has a great sense of humor. We both laugh until our cheeks hurt often. We both believe that mutual respect is important in a relationship and anger should absent in a marriage. Most importantly like me, she wants to help others, which I found very attractive when I met her. as we both talked with each other , we have fallen in deep love with each other, we share our thoughts our likes and dislikes, both of us realize the one important thing that we can't stay without each other. lastly we decided to marry.We had exchanged lots of thoughts and decided to fix up the family meeting. Also, both of our families are happy with it. On XXX we got engaged.
And all of our parents and family members desided our marriage date on XXX according to chinese calander on our engagement day.
We got married on the XXX and was attended by 100 people and we felt very happy for this relationship which is going to remain forever.
I never was a huge believer in fate until I looked back at how my wife and I met and then I realized what incredible fate, destiny, and divine intervention had to occur in order for us to meet.
I have to apply my spouse visa, so i need to write a letter for show "Evidence letter that I have a genuine and continuing relationship with my partner"
so please chek my below letter and correct any grammer mistakes and add some more lines to show our relationship is genuine.
Marriages are made in Heaven. They are only celebrated on earth. In the same vein, it can be said that the almighty has already fixed the pairs - they are only to be discovered.
I met my wife Shira at one of my cousin's marriage in August 2006.She came to marriage with her parents. I was seen Shira in the marriage and I can simple say that love at first sight.
After my cousin marriage we met again in my cousin’s marriage reception party, my cousin introduced me to her first time and that was the first day I spoken with her and we talked about normal matters that for several hours. We exchanged our mobile numbers that night.
I called to her my mobile everyday and talked on phone several hours everyday.
One day I asked to meet personally and finally We met first time in the coffee shop and we went to Village movies,I was in love since the first time we talked or I guess maybe I've even loved her before we talked for first time. Then for next few days we were the last people in the coffee shops which open till .
After first met we met again twice before I return to US in October 2006. after coming back to US I called her almost 3,4 times a week.
Shira is warm, loving, kind and most of all, she is really funny and has a great sense of humor. We both laugh until our cheeks hurt often. We both believe that mutual respect is important in a relationship and anger should absent in a marriage. Most importantly like me, she wants to help others, which I found very attractive when I met her. as we both talked with each other , we have fallen in deep love with each other, we share our thoughts our likes and dislikes, both of us realize the one important thing that we can't stay without each other. lastly we decided to marry.We had exchanged lots of thoughts and decided to fix up the family meeting. Also, both of our families are happy with it. On XXX we got engaged.
And all of our parents and family members desided our marriage date on XXX according to chinese calander on our engagement day.
We got married on the XXX and was attended by 100 people and we felt very happy for this relationship which is going to remain forever.
I never was a huge believer in fate until I looked back at how my wife and I met and then I realized what incredible fate, destiny, and divine intervention had to occur in order for us to meet.
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They are not really asking for some romantic essay proving that you believe in love and marriage - they want hard proof that this is a genuine marriage. You should also include information on how you have established your marriage after the ceremony - how you have bought a house together for example, that you live together, perhaps that you are trying for a baby etc. Your statements are a bit confusing - did you meet for the first time at your cousin's marriage or when you went to the movies?
- They are not really asking for some romantic essay proving that you believe in love and marriage - they want hard proof that this is a genuine marriage.
- You should also include information on how you have established your marriage after the ceremony - how you have bought a house together for example, that you live together, perhaps that you are trying for a baby etc.
- Your statements are a bit confusing - did you meet for the first time at your cousin's marriage or when you went to the movies?
- To be honest, I think that proclamations that you fell in love at first sight and loved her since you first met her sound rather phoney - they'd make me suspicious if I were looking at this as an immigration officer, it's more like a romantic novel than real life.
- Marriages are made in Heaven.
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They are not really asking for some romantic essay proving that you believe in love and marriage - they want hard proof that this is a genuine marriage. You should also include information on how you have established your marriage after the ceremony - how you have bought a house together for example, that you live together, perhaps that you are trying for a baby etc. Your
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Hi Nona,
Thankx for your quick reply, can you please look below and correct this one and please try to add some more lines to show how we build our relationship. becuase i am lil bit cofusing here to write good lines. so please add some lines to show how we build our relationship and how we fallen in love ... etc... like went movies , talked on the phone so so and topics and .... lil bit
Thankx for your quick reply, can you please look below and correct this one and please try to add some more lines to show how we build our relationship. becuase i am lil bit cofusing here to write good lines. so please add some lines to show how we build our relationship and how we fallen in love ... etc... like went movies , talked on the phone so so and topics and .... lil bit
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Nona: «I never was a huge believer in fate until I look back at how my wife and I met and then I realize what incredible fate, destiny, and divine intervention had to occur in order for us to meet.»
I just don't understand why you replaced "looked" with "look" and "realized" with "realize".
Could explain it?
I just don't understand why you replaced "looked" with "look" and "realized" with "realize".
Could explain it?
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Our parents and family members agreed our marriage date for ***, according to the Chinese calander on our engagement day.
One minor point: 'calander' should be 'calendar'.
One minor point: 'calander' should be 'calendar'.
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Nona: «I never was a huge believer in fate until I look back at how my wife and I met and then I realize what incredible fate, destiny, and divine intervention had to occur in order for us to meet.»
I just don't understand why you replaced "looked" with "look" and "realized" with "realize".
..because although the meeting happened in the past, you are thinking about it in the p
I just don't understand why you replaced "looked" with "look" and "realized" with "realize".
..because although the meeting happened in the past, you are thinking about it in the p
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Nona:
«..because although the meeting happened in the past, you are thinking about it in the present.»
You mean the looking back happens in the present? I thought it was a story of how he became "a huge believer in fate"...
I read that sentence as: "I was never a huge believer in fate before I had looked back..."
If am not right, then what's the meaning of this
«..because although the meeting happened in the past, you are thinking about it in the present.»
You mean the looking back happens in the present? I thought it was a story of how he became "a huge believer in fate"...
I read that sentence as: "I was never a huge believer in fate before I had looked back..."
If am not right, then what's the meaning of this
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hi Nona / Ant_222
Can you please correct my above letter and proivde good one...waiting for your reply.. coz i have to apply my visa this week..
plz plz plz ............ can you help me..
thankx
Can you please correct my above letter and proivde good one...waiting for your reply.. coz i have to apply my visa this week..
plz plz plz ............ can you help me..
thankx
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