spouse visa sponsoreship letter.please correct grammer mistakes.VERY URGENT

Hi,

any one please look below letter and correct any grammer mistakes and please try to add some more lines to show how we build our relationship. becuase i am lil bit cofusing here to write good lines. so please add some lines to show how we build our relationship and how we fallen in love ... etc... like went movies , talked on the phone so and so topics and .... lil bit etc...

coz i have to apply my spouse visa next week... so please do this favour for me...

main reson for this letter is "Evidence that our relationship is genuine and continuing "

so please any one do this favour for me.. coz i don't have much time to apply my spouse visa...



I met my wife Shira at my cousin's marriage in ***.She came to the marriage with her parents.

We met at the reception party, my cousin introduced me to her for the first time and we talked for several hours. We exchanged our mobile numbers that night. I called her on my mobile and we talked on the phone for several hours every day.

One day I asked to meet her and we went started dating. I had been in love since the first time we talked. First time we went IMAX theater for movie and that night we went to green park restaurant for candle night dinner. After that we met everyday evening in our local coffee shop and then for next few days we were the last people in the coffee shop which open till midnight.(can you please add some more lines here about dating and visitng places and any common topics we dissusseed)

Shira is warm, loving, kind and most of all; she is really funny and has a great sense of humor. We both laugh until our cheeks hurt. We both believe that mutual respect is important in a relationship and that anger should absent in a marriage. Most importantly like me, she wants to help others, which I found very attractive when I met her. We have fallen in deep love with each other, we share our thoughts our likes and dislikes and both of us realize the one important thing that we can't stay without is each other. Finally we decided to marry. We had exchanged lots of thoughts and decided to fix up the family meeting. Both of our families are happy with it. On *** we got engaged.

Our parents and family members agreed our marriage date for *** , according to the chinese calendar on our engagement day.

I returned to the US in ***. And we kept in touch on the phone everyday. We talked on the phone several hours everyday and planned how we can build our new life in US.( Can you please add some more lines here to how we planned about our future life)

I sent so many greeting and gifts during these days to her.

I came to China on *** for our marriage and we got married on the *** and it was attended by 100 people. We felt very happy about this relationship, which is going to remain forever.

I am enclosing our engagement photos and Videos and Our marriage photos and videos with my application.