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CliveHi,
this is what i came up with. it seems ok to me but i'm not sure how it flows of it is too bulky and whatnot:
Should you perhaps stress your involvement in the local community more?
(ie you, your families, your friends, your supporters)
Will there be the company name on your shirts? yes comp