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Sydney525 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Sponsorship letter
0 this is a letter that I created asking for a sponsorship donation for our cheer group. I need feed back on how it sounds and what I could/should change to make it better. 02 br
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00 Dear Donation Committee: 02 br
00 I am a member of the (name) organization. I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative. (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing Comminication, leadership adn Encouragement to our Cheer Team. This parnets group has just recently beeen formed but has already made a significant impact on the State level. The cheer Team does several things during the year to support our commuinity. Druing teh Community Days last year the girls all helped out at the local Blood Drive, they did face Painting for chilren and they have done daycare services for several of the business meetings in town. At their state competition last year the squad place third in the spring and the fall. As a parents group we are fundraising to purchase them Cheer Mats to keep them safe and to host the State Cheer Competition. Wehn we aren enough money to purchase the Mats we will be the second school in the state of North Dakota to own them. 02 br
00 I was wondering if your company would be interested in finanicially helping out our (name) Cheer Team with these importand functions. I hope that you will help sponsor us in teh state cheer meet and with the purchase of our mats. 02 br
00 Enclosed is a pledge card with a return addressed envelope for your convience, please makechecks payable to (name) if you have any question please feel free to call me at (phone number). I look forward to ehareing that you will help us out in this worthwhile projects. 02 br
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00 what do you think. this is the first one that I have written and I tried to use your examples last night. 0-
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00 Dear Donation Committee: 02 br
00 I am a member of the (name) organization. I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative. (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing Comminication, leadership adn Encouragement to our Cheer Team. This parnets group has just recently beeen formed but has already made a significant impact on the State level. The cheer Team does several things during the year to support our commuinity. Druing teh Community Days last year the girls all helped out at the local Blood Drive, they did face Painting for chilren and they have done daycare services for several of the business meetings in town. At their state competition last year the squad place third in the spring and the fall. As a parents group we are fundraising to purchase them Cheer Mats to keep them safe and to host the State Cheer Competition. Wehn we aren enough money to purchase the Mats we will be the second school in the state of North Dakota to own them. 02 br
00 I was wondering if your company would be interested in finanicially helping out our (name) Cheer Team with these importand functions. I hope that you will help sponsor us in teh state cheer meet and with the purchase of our mats. 02 br
00 Enclosed is a pledge card with a return addressed envelope for your convience, please makechecks payable to (name) if you have any question please feel free to call me at (phone number). I look forward to ehareing that you will help us out in this worthwhile projects. 02 br
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00 what do you think. this is the first one that I have written and I tried to use your examples last night. 0-
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0 Dear Donation Committee, 02 br 00 I am a member of the (name) organization. I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative. (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing communication, leadership and encouragement to our cheer team.
- 0 Dear Donation Committee, 02 br 00 I am a member of the (name) organization.
- I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative.
- (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing communication, leadership and encouragement to our cheer team.
- This parnets group has just recently beeen formed but has already made a significant impact on the State level.
- The cheer team does several things during the year to support our community.
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0 Dear Donation Committee, 02 br
00 I am a member of the (name) organization. I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative. (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing communication, leadership and encouragement to our cheer team. This parnets group has just recently beeen formed but has already made a significant impact on the State level. The cheer team does severa
00 I am a member of the (name) organization. I have taken on the roll of sponsor representative. (name) is a non-profit group of parents who are offereing communication, leadership and encouragement to our cheer team. This parnets group has just recently beeen formed but has already made a significant impact on the State level. The cheer team does severa
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