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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Spirng Awakening half-page

0Hi there, can anyone check if I have any error? Thank you a lot to whoever help me.02br
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00 00For the on-campus workshop that I was required to do, is I went to one of the performing art show on May 15, 2008. The name of the show is 01i00Springs Awakening02i00. The show started at 8:00pm and ended at 10:45pm including a fifteen minutes intermission. There were not a whole lot of people watching the show only about one-fourth of the seats in the theater was occupied. The show was good but not that great. The reason why I said it was good and not great is because some of the language that they used in the show was hard for me to understand. The show is about a girl named Wendla; she is fourteen years old and wanted her mom to tell her where baby comes from. Her mom didn’t want to tell her. She met a guy name Melchior. They had sex. Wendla got sick, but didn’t know that she is pregnant until her mom told her so. The reason why Wendla didn’t know that she is pregnant is because her mom never told her the truth of how baby was made. She didn’t know that sex could make you pregnant; she thought it was only if you love someone so much. She later died of anemia. Melchior knew of Wendla dead when he stumbled across a grave with her name on it. All in all, there is more to the show but I decided to only sum up the main point of the show or else this paper could be several pages long. 00 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02br 02i 02br 00For the on-campus workshop that I was required to 01u 00do, is02u 00 I went to one of the performing art 01u 00show02u 00 on May 15, 2008. The name of the show is 01i 01u 00Springs02u 00 Awakening02i 00. The show started at01b 00 8:00 pm02b 00 and ended at 01b 0010:45 pm02b 00 including a 01u 00fifteen minutes02u 00 intermission.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02br 02i 02br 00For the on-campus workshop that I was required to 01u 00do, is02u 00 I went to one of the performing art 01u 00show02u 00 on May 15, 2008.
  • The name of the show is 01i 01u 00Springs02u 00 Awakening02i 00.
  • The show started at01b 00 8:00 pm02b 00 and ended at 01b 0010:45 pm02b 00 including a 01u 00fifteen minutes02u 00 intermission.
  • There were not a whole lot of people watching the 01u 00show only02u 00 about one-fourth of the seats in the theater 01u 00was02u 00 occupied.
  • The show was good but not that great.
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