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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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“Johnson & Johnson has recalled one of the replacement hips it manufactures because the devices can come loose, fracturing the bone around the implant and causing tumors. Your replacement hip should have meant more mobility and much less pain. But now you’re finding out that it might be a source of new, serious medical problems. The Rottenstein Law Group knows that you don’t have to stand for this.”
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Hi It is a well-written piece, but a lengthier version would be: - As you get old, one of the things that can happen is that the joint between your hip and leg becomes frail. There is a medical procedure whereby you can have your hip joint replaced by surgery. The joint is replaced with a specially designed piece of metal - or it is sometimes ceramic.
- Hi It is a well-written piece, but a lengthier version would be: - As you get old, one of the things that can happen is that the joint between your hip and leg becomes frail.
- There is a medical procedure whereby you can have your hip joint replaced by surgery.
- The joint is replaced with a specially designed piece of metal - or it is sometimes ceramic.
- This is very often successful and means that that you can move around more easily and you do not suffer the pain that you had before.
- However, the surgery may not be carried out successfully: you may end up with more medical problems than you had before.
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It is a well-written piece, but a lengthier version would be:
- As you get old, one of the things that can happen is that the joint between your hip and leg becomes frail. There is a medical procedure whereby you can have your hip joint replaced by surgery. The joint is replaced with a specially designed piece of metal - or it is sometimes ceramic. This is very often succes
It is a well-written piece, but a lengthier version would be:
- As you get old, one of the things that can happen is that the joint between your hip and leg becomes frail. There is a medical procedure whereby you can have your hip joint replaced by surgery. The joint is replaced with a specially designed piece of metal - or it is sometimes ceramic. This is very often succes
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