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Snarf Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Speechless vs. Its Adverb

He leaves as she stares after him speechless.

Is it okay that way without using the adverb, "speechlessly"?

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Grammatically, no. However, the adjective seems possible as an afterthought: He leaves as she stares at him , speechless or Speechless, she stares at him as he leaves. )

  • Grammatically, no.
  • However, the adjective seems possible as an afterthought: He leaves as she stares at him , speechless or Speechless, she stares at him as he leaves.
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Grammatically, no. However, the adjective seems possible as an afterthought: He leaves as she stares at him, speechless or Speechless, she stares at him as he leaves.

(I can’t say I’ve ever heard stare after someone; only at sounds natural to me.)
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Snarf......He leaves as she stares (after)(at) him, speechless.
Is it okay that way without using the adverb, "speechlessly"? Yes, it's okay. "speechlessly" is an extremely uncommon word, so much so that I had to check a dictionary to see if it's a real word. A
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Aspara Gus Grammatically, no. However, the adjective seems possible as an afterthought: He leaves as she stares at him,speechless.

(I can’t say I’ve ever heard stare after someone; only at sounds natural to me.)
She stares after him because he's walking away.

So there should be a comma after "him"?
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SnarfSo there should be a comma after "him"?
Yes there should be, if you want to use "speechless".
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SnarfShe stares after him because he's walking away. Emotion: zip it!
I don’t like this one at all.
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Aspara GusSnarfShe stares after him because he's walking away. I don’t like this one at all.
What do you mean "this one"? I wasn't trying to reword it. I'm just telling you why I used "after" in the first place.
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canadian45 SnarfSo there should be a comma after "him"?Yes there should be, if you want to use "speechless".
Well, let me ask you something, Canadian: Doesn't the comma there make it look like he's the one who's speechless rather than her? Because it is her that is speechless, not him.
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SnarfI wasn't trying to reword it. I'm just telling you why I used "after" in the first place.
I mistook your "explanation" as a new example sentence, and you can hardly blame me, because you don’t italicize or color your examples.

(I’m still not wild about after, but OK.)


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That "after" is plain English. From the Oxford on line: "(with reference to looking or speaking) in the direction of someone who is moving further away: she stared after him"
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enoonThat "after" is plain English. From the Oxford on line: "(with reference to looking or speaking) in the direction of someone who is moving further away: she stared after him"
Well, I’ll be damned.

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