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Tokyo citizen Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

speech script

Dear native English teachers

This is part of my script for a speech in my class.
Could you please correct errors or strange expressions to native speakers although not incorrect?

The prior part of this is in

Last semester, I took a physical chemistry class, so I wanted to learn more about one of the most famous physical chemists. Lewis contributed a lot to the field of physical chemistry. That is why I chose Lewis for my speech. In addition, because his work was broad rather than deep, it is easier to talk about various things about him than other scientists who worked on only a small number of things deeply.
  

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Last semester, I took a physical chemistry class, so I wanted to learn more about one of the most famous physical c hemists, William Lewis, and t hat is why I have chosen Lewis for my speech. Because his work was broad rather than deep, it is easier to talk about his work than t hat of other scientists.

  • Last semester, I took a physical chemistry class, so I wanted to learn more about one of the most famous physical c hemists, William Lewis, and t hat is why I have chosen Lewis for my speech.
  • Because his work was broad rather than deep, it is easier to talk about his work than t hat of other scientists.
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Last semester, I took a physical chemistry class, so I wanted to learn more about one of the most famous physical chemists, William Lewis, and that is why I have chosen Lewis for my speech. Because his work was broad rather than deep, it is easier to talk about his work than that of other scientists.
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Thank you very much.
But could you please save the parts you have get rid of from my original script?
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Last semester, I took a physical-chemistry class, so I wanted to learn more about one of the most famous physical chemists, Gilbert N. Lewis. Lewis contributed a lot to the field of physical chemistry. That is why I have chosen Lewis to talk about him for my speech today. In addition, because his work was broad rather than deep, it is easier to

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