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Jolie laide Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Speech= grammar and word usage= is it right?
Are the word usage and grammar corrrect? because, I find it hard to correct these sentences. Thank you very much for your great help guys... ^^
1. I esteem it a great honor to address you at this contest. This is second time stand here and make a speech so I deeply appreciate my Lord and my mom.
2. I think drawing cartoons well is very important but less than making plenty contents with a good story. Therefore, everyday I read a newspaper to get an idea and to put myself in the middle of the thoughts.
1. I esteem it a great honor to address you at this contest. This is second time stand here and make a speech so I deeply appreciate my Lord and my mom.
2. I think drawing cartoons well is very important but less than making plenty contents with a good story. Therefore, everyday I read a newspaper to get an idea and to put myself in the middle of the thoughts.
Top answer
1. I consider it a great honor to address you at this contest. This is the second time I have stood here to make a speech so I deeply appreciate my Lord and my mom.
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- I consider it a great honor to address you at this contest.
- This is the second time I have stood here to make a speech so I deeply appreciate my Lord and my mom.
- [The word "so" doesn't work for me; there doesn't seem to be a sufficient "cause and effect" relationship between the two parts of the sentence.
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1. I consider it a great honor to address you at this contest. This is the second time I have stood here to make a speech so I deeply appreciate my Lord and my mom. [The word "so" doesn't work for me; there doesn't seem to be a sufficient "cause and effect" relationship between the two parts of the sentence. You could, starting a new sentence, say "I'd like t
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