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Ritwik06 Posted 19 years ago
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Here is what I have prepared for a 2 minute speech. I know that my english isnt too good but the only thing I could do was to try. Please make modifications wherever you feel necessary. And do tell me at last how it sounds 
Technology is niether good nor bad, [pause] nor even neutral. Technology is one part of the complex relationships that people form with each other and the world around them.
Computer, has brought an amazing revolution in the life around in the present day world. It has launched the human race into the 21st century much in advance of its chronological date.
Computers have invaded almost all the aspects of human life. [emphasis] No one today even thinks of carrying a paper and pen today [emphasis], [resuming the relaxed tune] they carry hand-helds and laptops instead. The modern computer has made things, [emphasis] just clicks away [emphasis] .
To name a new fields, in which this sophisticated machine has marked its significance and indispensability, the first would be science and technology. The heavy mainframes and super computers work beyond imagination. Innumerable calculations in a time frame of a billionth of a second. This enables the scientists and technologists to cover a range of activities within no time, or rather nominal time.
The next most important aspect almost revolutionized by the computers is that of communication. Facilities like instant messaging and e-mail transmit any type of digital media as fast as the wires can carry them, almost comparable to the speed of light.
Instant travel reservations, distant-education and computer aided design are other such sectors which have made life easy. The contents of 7 lac A4 sheets can be stored in a small DVD, with still some storage space to spare.
The merits of the invention are too great for anyone to belittle it. But the question arises: what in distant future shall be the role and contributions of human limbs to the growth of its total personality. [inquisitive tone]Will they become crippled through slow degeneration an disuse?
I shall be highly obliged if you do the correction for me.
regards, Ritwik
Computer Technology
The goal of any technology is to make our lives better. Whether it makes us more productive in the workplace or allows us to relax while watching the Super Bowl in high definition with surround sound, we have all come to appreciate what technology can do for us.Technology is niether good nor bad, [pause] nor even neutral. Technology is one part of the complex relationships that people form with each other and the world around them.
Computer, has brought an amazing revolution in the life around in the present day world. It has launched the human race into the 21st century much in advance of its chronological date.
Computers have invaded almost all the aspects of human life. [emphasis] No one today even thinks of carrying a paper and pen today [emphasis], [resuming the relaxed tune] they carry hand-helds and laptops instead. The modern computer has made things, [emphasis] just clicks away [emphasis] .
To name a new fields, in which this sophisticated machine has marked its significance and indispensability, the first would be science and technology. The heavy mainframes and super computers work beyond imagination. Innumerable calculations in a time frame of a billionth of a second. This enables the scientists and technologists to cover a range of activities within no time, or rather nominal time.
The next most important aspect almost revolutionized by the computers is that of communication. Facilities like instant messaging and e-mail transmit any type of digital media as fast as the wires can carry them, almost comparable to the speed of light.
Instant travel reservations, distant-education and computer aided design are other such sectors which have made life easy. The contents of 7 lac A4 sheets can be stored in a small DVD, with still some storage space to spare.
The merits of the invention are too great for anyone to belittle it. But the question arises: what in distant future shall be the role and contributions of human limbs to the growth of its total personality. [inquisitive tone]Will they become crippled through slow degeneration an disuse?
I shall be highly obliged if you do the correction for me.
regards, Ritwik
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