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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Specially for women..Kindly help
0 We are pleased to offer our patrons an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition. 02 br
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00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for the woman of today. 02 br
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00 I want to tell it's for women specially so how can we rephrase the above sentences? In second sentence rather than wqoman of today i want it for design concious or fashion concious something on that lines 02 br
00 Kinldy help me 02 br
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00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for the woman of today. 02 br
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00 I want to tell it's for women specially so how can we rephrase the above sentences? In second sentence rather than wqoman of today i want it for design concious or fashion concious something on that lines 02 br
00 Kinldy help me 02 br
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0 First line I modified to 02 br 02 br 00 We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition 02 br 02 br 00 Second line i modified to 02 br 00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, 00 especially 00 for those 00 fashion 00 - 00 conscious women 00 who desire to look more stylish and classy 00 0-
- 0 First line I modified to 02 br 02 br 00 We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition 02 br 02 br 00 Second line i modified to 02 br 00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, 00 especially 00 for those 00 fashion 00 - 00 conscious women 00 who desire to look more stylish and classy 00 0-
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0 First line I modified to 02 br
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00 We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition 02 br
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00 Second line i modified to 02 br
00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, 00 especially 00 for those 00 fashion 00 - 00 conscious women 00 who desire to lo
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00 We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition 02 br
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00 Second line i modified to 02 br
00 'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, 00 especially 00 for those 00 fashion 00 - 00 conscious women 00 who desire to lo
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0 You have to be very careful to avoid sounding patronising to women: 02 br
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01 b 00 We offer an exclusive preview of our latest Limited Edition to our patrons. 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 For any woman whose look is stylish, "Disney Fine Jewelry" is the obvious choice - works of art created by master craftsmen. 02 b 0-
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01 b 00 We offer an exclusive preview of our latest Limited Edition to our patrons. 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 For any woman whose look is stylish, "Disney Fine Jewelry" is the obvious choice - works of art created by master craftsmen. 02 b 0-
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0 For the woman who wants to look stylish .......................................... 0-
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