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Ellisa Posted 8 years ago
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I'm preparing IELTS speaking and I wrote a sample answer for the following question.

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What kind of options do people in your country have when it comes to entertainment?


I’d like to distinguish entertainment for adults from that for children. The former usually involves drinking and singing. That’s why most businessmen think of a business dinner consisting of dinner and karaoke bars. Of course, some athletic people entertain themselves working out at a gym or a swimming pool. For those who are under 18, especially boys usually play online games at a local pc room. They(a group of school lads) might gather in a playground and enjoy ball games. I’m not sure what the girls do but I’ve seen my cousin have a sleepover at her friend’s. I heard she and her friends bought the same pajamas for the night.

  

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I’d like to distinguish entertainment for adults from that for children. The former usually involves drinking and singing. That’s why most [ *] businessmen think of a business dinner as consisting of dinner a meal and karaoke bars.

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  • I’d like to distinguish entertainment for adults from that for children.
  • The former usually involves drinking and singing.
  • That’s why most [ *] businessmen think of a business dinner as consisting of dinner a meal and karaoke bars.
  • Of course, some athletic people entertain themselves by working out at a gym or going to a swimming pool.
  • For those who are under 18, especially boy s, entertainment usually means play ing online games at a local internet cafe.
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I’d like to distinguish entertainment for adults from that for children. The former usually involves drinking and singing. That’s why most [ *] businessmen think of a business dinner as consisting of dinner a meal and karaoke bars. Of course, some athletic people entertain themselves

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