Last weekend was Betty's birthday. Betty's mother made a birthday cake for her. She stood on the chair to helped her mother got some flour. Next, she fell down the chair, she was very hurt and her mother was worried. Then, her one leg can't walk, she only can sat on the bed, she was sad. After that, she was slept and her friends came to room and see her. Finally, Betty's friends gave to her lots of presents. Her mother brought the birthday cake into her room. And everyone were enjoyed the party.
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