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Tanit Posted 19 years ago
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01 font 00 This is a very long sentence, meant to be formal (it's part of a scientific article). I'm not sure about the length and about the underlined part. Any ideas? 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Thanks in advance! 02 font 02 br
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01 i 00 XYZ 02 i 00 should be user friendly, communicative, and flexible 01 i 00 (SOURCE1) 02 i 00 , in order to provide all the stakeholders (not only planners and decision makers) with relevant information, and with interactive, integrative and participatory procedures 01 i 00 (SOURCE2) 02 i 00 , 01 u 00 the main aim being that of 02 u 00 facilitating discussion and participation about strategic spatial decisions 01 i 00 (SOURCE3), 02 i 00 which would enormously benefit from collaboration and participation of people with different interests, aims, and knowledge 01 i 00 (SOURCE4). 02 i 0-
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01 font 00 This is a very long sentence, meant to be formal (it's part of a scientific article). I'm not sure about the length and about the underlined part. Any ideas? 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Thanks in advance! 02 font 02 br
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01 i 00 XYZ 02 i 00 should be user friendly, communicative, and flexible 01 i 00 (SOURCE1) 02 i 00 , in order to provide all the stakeholders (not only planners and decision makers) with relevant information, and with interactive, integrative and participatory procedures 01 i 00 (SOURCE2) 02 i 00 , 01 u 00 the main aim being that of 02 u 00 facilitating discussion and participation about strategic spatial decisions 01 i 00 (SOURCE3), 02 i 00 which would enormously benefit from collaboration and participation of people with different interests, aims, and knowledge 01 i 00 (SOURCE4). 02 i 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 00 If you want this sentence to be 'reader-friendly', my advice is to break it up into two or more sentences. That way, you won't need to worry about the underlined part. You can just rewrite it, eg 01 font 00 The main aim is to .
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 00 If you want this sentence to be 'reader-friendly', my advice is to break it up into two or more sentences.
- That way, you won't need to worry about the underlined part.
- You can just rewrite it, eg 01 font 00 The main aim is to .
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- 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 Best wishes, Clive.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 If you want this sentence to be 'reader-friendly', my advice is to break it up into two or more sentences. That way, you won't need to worry about the underlined part. You can just rewrite it, eg 01 font 00 The main aim is to . . . 02 font 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Clive. 0-
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00 If you want this sentence to be 'reader-friendly', my advice is to break it up into two or more sentences. That way, you won't need to worry about the underlined part. You can just rewrite it, eg 01 font 00 The main aim is to . . . 02 font 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Clive. 0-
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1 i 00 XYZ 02 i 00 should be user friendly, communicative, and flexible 01 i 00 (SOURCE1) 02 i 00 , in order to provide all the stakeholders (not only 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 planners and 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 decision makers) with relevant information, and with interactive, integrative and participatory procedures 01 i 00 (SOUR
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