Hi
Does the red part sound natural? Any better suggestions please?
Jane never made it to the party and it soured his mood immensely.
Thanks,
Tom
Mr. Tom Does the red part sound natural? It's fine.
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Mr. TomDoes the red part sound natural?
It's fine. I have no further suggestions except to say that I'd leave out "immensely".
CJ