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soup

John's mom is cooking his favor chicken soup on Saturday night. She fires up the water over 100 Celsius. Then she put the pork bones, the whole half cooking chicken, some herbs, and other ingredients as well. When all the ingredients are in the pot, his mother lowering the temperature, they will be simmered for five hours.

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Hi, John's mom is cooking his favor chicken soup on Saturday night. She fires up the water over 100 Celsius. Then she put the pork bones, the whole half cooking chicken, some herbs, and other ingredients as well.

  • Hi, John's mom is cooking his favor chicken soup on Saturday night.
  • She fires up the water over 100 Celsius.
  • Then she put the pork bones, the whole half cooking chicken, some herbs, and other ingredients as well.
  • When all the ingredients are in the pot, his mother lowering the temperature, they will be simmered for five hours.
  • John's mom is cooking his favourite chicken soup on Saturday night.
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Hi,

John's mom is cooking his favor chicken soup on Saturday night. She fires up the water over 100 Celsius. Then she put the pork bones, the whole half cooking chicken, some herbs, and other ingredients as well. When all the ingredients are in the pot, his mother lowering the temperature, they will be simmered for five hours.

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Thank you.

I think it is descriptive writing detailing the action as it enfolds and also, as the elements of the process, it describes what she will do next in terms of cooking her chicken soup.

Can the last sentence be "When everything is in the pot, her mother will lower the temperature, and it will simmer to five hours"?
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Hi.

Can the last sentence be "When everything is in the pot, her mother will lower the temperature, and it will simmer to five hours"?

Yes. But to stay with present tense, it might be better to say"When everything is in the pot, her mother lowers the temperature and it simmers for five hours".

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