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Liton Das Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Sounds fool

I know I am going to sound like a fool but please correct me.


Dear god happy new year may this new year brings me a desirable job, the physique I dream to achieve, a hike or an increment in my salary for my existing job.

  

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Liton Das a desirable job This is about a job. Liton Das the physique I dream to achieve This is about your physique. Liton Das a hike or an increment in my salary for my existing job.

— CalifJim

  • Liton Das a desirable job This is about a job.
  • Liton Das the physique I dream to achieve This is about your physique.
  • Liton Das a hike or an increment in my salary for my existing job.
  • This is about a job again.
  • Why are you separating your thoughts about jobs by an unrelated idea about your physique?
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Liton Dasa desirable job

This is about a job.

Liton Dasthe physique I dream to achieve

This is about your physique.

Liton Dasa hike or an increment in my salary for my existing job.

This is about a job again. Why are you separating your thoughts about jobs by an unrelated

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Liton Dasa hike or an increment

'a hike' is the same as 'an increment' except that 'hike' is more like slang.

In good writing you choose the one word that says exactly what you mean. You don't give the reader a choice!

CJ

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Liton Dasmay this new year brings! me ...

After a modal verb (may), you must use the plain form of the following verb.

May this new year bring me ...

CJ

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Liton DasI know I am going to sound like a fool

Don't be so pessimistic. It doesn't become you.

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