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Essay & Composition Writing

Sound like formal

When you give written feedback on students' papers, can I say as follows?

( for a formal academic research paper)

You should keep a formal tone in your paper. Your paper does not sound like a formal paper. It sould look more academic tone.
  

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Hi, When you give written feedback on students' papers, can I say as follows? ( for a formal academic research paper) You should keep a formal tone in your paper. Your paper does not sound like a formal paper.

  • Hi, When you give written feedback on students' papers, can I say as follows?
  • ( for a formal academic research paper) You should keep a formal tone in your paper.
  • Your paper does not sound like a formal paper.
  • It sould look more academic tone.
  • I'd just say 'You need to write more formally'.
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Hi,

When you give written feedback on students' papers, can I say as follows?

( for a formal academic research paper)

You should keep a formal tone in your paper. Your paper does not sound like a formal paper. It sould look more academic tone.

I'd just say 'You need to write more formally'.



Clive

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