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I want a phone that can fold into a book, so I can fit a large screen into my pocket, so I can use applications meant for tablets on the go.
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onelook I want a phone that can fold into a book, so I can fit a large screen into my pocket, so I can use applications meant for tablets on the go. It's grammatical, but it trails along quite a bit, which is not a mark of great style. If it's in an email to a friend, you can leave it.
- onelook I want a phone that can fold into a book, so I can fit a large screen into my pocket, so I can use applications meant for tablets on the go.
- It's grammatical, but it trails along quite a bit, which is not a mark of great style.
- If it's in an email to a friend, you can leave it.
- If it's something for school, you should change it.
- CJ
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onelookI want a phone that can fold into a book, so I can fit a large screen into my pocket, so I can use applications meant for tablets on the go.
It's grammatical, but it trails along quite a bit, which is not a mark of great style. If it's in an email to a friend, you can leave it. If it's something for school, you should change it.
CJ
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