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0 Dear Sir or Madam, 02br
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00The reason for that letter is that I am applying for the international summer school as I constantly search to evolve and accomplish my personal and academic objectives. 02br
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00Knowing that English has become a global language that runs through the heart of science, technology and finance and is understood by millions of people across the world and also accepting the fact that we live in a world of lifelong learning, I could not think of a better way of developing my general communicational skills in English and improving my accuracy than attending an English course in the Uk. 02br
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00Moreover learning English in the Uk is a great opportunity not only to visit one of the most fascinating countries in the world but also to meet new people from different countries and learn about their cultures. 02br
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00Last but not least I chose Manchester as after finishing my course here in Greece I am planning to take a post-graduate degree in materials science there. So it would be a good chance to acquaint with the city and the university environment. 02br
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00All in all I believe that this course would be an unforgettable and valuable experience. 02br
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00Thank you very much for considering my application. 02br
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00Yours faithfully, 0-
  

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0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br 02br 00This letter is in application for your international summer school. 02br 02br 00English has become a global language that runs through the heart of science, technology and finance, and is understood by millions of people around the world. And since we live in a world of lifelong learning, I can think of no better way of developing my general communication skills and improving my accuracy in English than attending an English course in the UK.

  • 0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br 02br 00This letter is in application for your international summer school.
  • 02br 02br 00English has become a global language that runs through the heart of science, technology and finance, and is understood by millions of people around the world.
  • And since we live in a world of lifelong learning, I can think of no better way of developing my general communication skills and improving my accuracy in English than attending an English course in the UK.
  • 02br 02br 00Moreover, learning English in the UK would be a great opportunity not only to visit one of the most fascinating countries in the world but also to meet new people from different countries and learn about their cultures.
  • 02br 02br 00I am applying to Manchester because, after finishing my course here in Greece, I am planning to take a postgraduate degree in materials science there.
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0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br
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00This letter is in application for your international summer school. 02br
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00English has become a global language that runs through the heart of science, technology and finance, and is understood by millions of people around the world. And since we live in a world of lifelong learning, I can think of no better way of d

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