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Sonia_1202 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
SOS: Motivation Letter
Hello, this is my motivation letter, and I need to write more, what else could I add up? Thanks for your help in advance..
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is ......, ... years old and have completed my studies in .......... School in ......, a bilingual school where i had the opportunity of learning both, English and Spanish.
I inform my desire to participate in the ........................................ Program. I believe that this progrm will give me the opportunity to link my past education and experiences with new studies in the hospitality field.
To achieve my goals, I need a good eduation this I strongly believe that this is the right place; it has always been my dream to work in the hospitality industry, mainly because it deals with communicating with people around the world which is personally enriching.
I chose Switzerland as a destination for my further studies as the roots of hospitality are there, and as we all know, hospitality is lobal, which is why i feel the necessity of going abroad to study and acquire both, theoretical and cultural knowledge. This program is a great opportunity for my professional project as ... is an institution that stimulates the integration of studies and practice, which is very important. This means that I will gain experience and knowledge to retrn to my homeplace as an irreplaceable worker and become beneficial to my country.
Personally, I am an organized person, motivated, hard-working and ambitious. I have learnt the values of teamwork and organization to accomplish tasks in time by helping my father in his business, which is very important as the program is specialised in BA and makes me strongly believe that this experience will be very valuable in my studies as I have learnt to attend different customers and treat them in a way so they feel comfortable.
(Here I'd show a few results to prove my English and Spanish speaking/writing/reading fluently)
I am very interested and motivated to study at your university. Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional queries or comments regarding my motivation.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully...
please tell me what i need to modify/edit..and how can i improve it! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is ......, ... years old and have completed my studies in .......... School in ......, a bilingual school where i had the opportunity of learning both, English and Spanish.
I inform my desire to participate in the ........................................ Program. I believe that this progrm will give me the opportunity to link my past education and experiences with new studies in the hospitality field.
To achieve my goals, I need a good eduation this I strongly believe that this is the right place; it has always been my dream to work in the hospitality industry, mainly because it deals with communicating with people around the world which is personally enriching.
I chose Switzerland as a destination for my further studies as the roots of hospitality are there, and as we all know, hospitality is lobal, which is why i feel the necessity of going abroad to study and acquire both, theoretical and cultural knowledge. This program is a great opportunity for my professional project as ... is an institution that stimulates the integration of studies and practice, which is very important. This means that I will gain experience and knowledge to retrn to my homeplace as an irreplaceable worker and become beneficial to my country.
Personally, I am an organized person, motivated, hard-working and ambitious. I have learnt the values of teamwork and organization to accomplish tasks in time by helping my father in his business, which is very important as the program is specialised in BA and makes me strongly believe that this experience will be very valuable in my studies as I have learnt to attend different customers and treat them in a way so they feel comfortable.
(Here I'd show a few results to prove my English and Spanish speaking/writing/reading fluently)
I am very interested and motivated to study at your university. Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional queries or comments regarding my motivation.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully...
please tell me what i need to modify/edit..and how can i improve it! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Top answer
You could expand on why you want to work in hospitality and what sort of role you see yourself playing there. You also need to check your spellings as you have lots of errors. Also, I is always capitalised.
- You could expand on why you want to work in hospitality and what sort of role you see yourself playing there.
- You also need to check your spellings as you have lots of errors.
- Also, I is always capitalised.
- There are grammatical and punctuation errors as well.
- I get the impression that your English is actually quite good but you have just been very careless.
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You could expand on why you want to work in hospitality and what sort of role you see yourself playing there. You also need to check your spellings as you have lots of errors. Also, I is always capitalised. There are grammatical and punctuation errors as well. I get the impression that your English is actually quite good but you have just been very careless.
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Hello, this is my motivation letter, and I need to write more, what else could I add up? Thanks for your help in advance..
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