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Ocsenttdd Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Sorry e-mail

I want to write an sorry email to the recruiters because I missed their phone call for the test internship. And want them to contact me again for another occasion. Could you correct the mistake for me and make the sentences more smooth. Thanks in advance.

Dear recruiters.
I'm really sorry about not answer your phone call this afternoon. I went out for a minute and didn't bring it with me. When I saw your miss call, I tried to call back but the line was alway busy.
I hope that you will contact me again and give another occasion. And I promise that I'll answer in time.
Thanks for your symphathy.
  

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Dear Recruiters, I am truly sorry about having missed your phone call this afternoon. I went out for a minute and failed to take my phone with me. When I saw I had missed your call, I tried to call back, but the line was busy, and I was unable to get through.

  • Dear Recruiters, I am truly sorry about having missed your phone call this afternoon.
  • I went out for a minute and failed to take my phone with me.
  • When I saw I had missed your call, I tried to call back, but the line was busy, and I was unable to get through.
  • I hope that you will contact me again and give another opportunity.
  • I promise that I will not miss your call again.
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Dear Recruiters,

I am truly sorry about having missed your phone call this afternoon. I went out for a minute and failed to take my phone with me. When I saw I had missed your call, I tried to call back, but the line was busy, and I was unable to get through.
I hope that you wi

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