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Wawaway Posted 21 years ago

Sorry

This my first attempt of poem writing. Feel free to critizie it.

Sorry, for saying no way

because you don't know what does it mean to be alone

without a friend, a lover, without yourself

Sorry, if you want to understand and sorry if you don't

My life with you teared me down

like a peice of paper you through me a way

you let cray by my eye

you let my tears come to its way

please, leave me a lone and let me cry

until I find my survival way

may be I will, may be not

but its better its better to live it my own way
  

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i don't know Wawaway..... but i feel you can do better... but i think there are some rules...

— Mjholah

  • i don't know Wawaway.....
  • but i feel you can do better...
  • but i think there are some rules...
  • waiting for more better poems...
  • my regards, M.
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i don't know Wawaway.....

it seems good ....but i feel you can do better...

to be honest..i don't know english poetries....but i think there are some rules...

waiting for more better poems...
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your title make me enter to read, this magical word, sorry, i will say my opinion as reader not as professional because my first language is Arabic not English, so i found it nice and easy to complete and has clear sense, but why this foiling at the end?
you can find some way to live together in the middle of your both mental attitude and your viewing towards things and s
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WawawayMy life with you teared me down

Shouldn't "teared" be "tore"?

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