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Anita_a Posted 22 years ago
Sorrow..
There r days
when I feel
as if the world
around me has
just stopped its
stroll and is
no more of
any use to me.
There r days
when nothing seems
as they should be
and my whole
being seems to
just wilt away
to the winds of
the world's sorrow.
There r days
When I feel
that nobody loves me
as they used to
nothing seems to matter
no cares about
where my life
is travising ahead.
when I feel
as if the world
around me has
just stopped its
stroll and is
no more of
any use to me.
There r days
when nothing seems
as they should be
and my whole
being seems to
just wilt away
to the winds of
the world's sorrow.
There r days
When I feel
that nobody loves me
as they used to
nothing seems to matter
no cares about
where my life
is travising ahead.
Top answer
Hi Anita Your deep thoughts are excellent, really u have composed very nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Well as a answer of your poem I want to say: Don’t be sorrow Take some borrow Hopes for tomorrow How is this?
- Hi Anita Your deep thoughts are excellent, really u have composed very nice poem.
- Thanks for sharing.
- Well as a answer of your poem I want to say: Don’t be sorrow Take some borrow Hopes for tomorrow How is this?
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Hi Anita
Your deep thoughts are excellent, really u have composed very nice poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Well as a answer of your poem I want to say:
Don’t be sorrow
Take some borrow
Hopes for tomorrow
How is this?
Your deep thoughts are excellent, really u have composed very nice poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Well as a answer of your poem I want to say:
Don’t be sorrow
Take some borrow
Hopes for tomorrow
How is this?
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Thanks Raji
here's one more
I don't want anything from you
I want to give you my love
I don't want to see your face
I want to lock you in my heart
I don't want to feel your touch
I want you to dwell in my being
I don't want loving words from you
I want to sing love songs to you
I don't want you to live with me
I want to die loving y
here's one more
I don't want anything from you
I want to give you my love
I don't want to see your face
I want to lock you in my heart
I don't want to feel your touch
I want you to dwell in my being
I don't want loving words from you
I want to sing love songs to you
I don't want you to live with me
I want to die loving y
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Thanks raji and Maj. Please check out the other poems, Remembrance & to my lover far away too.
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Where did I lose them?
Where can I find them?
The little worries
That came riding
On the horse of Time
Threw away
My laughs
My smiles
And All the happiness
That I had bundled
And had preserved
Till this day.
Will I ever find them?
Will they be mine again?
Where can I find them?
The little worries
That came riding
On the horse of Time
Threw away
My laughs
My smiles
And All the happiness
That I had bundled
And had preserved
Till this day.
Will I ever find them?
Will they be mine again?
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Anita,
Your poetry has potential, but I'm sure you could express your thoughts with more concrete imagery, less clichè phrases, and more umph!
Consider every word as though it may be your last. Syntax and diction are SO important!
Your fellow writer and poet,
Sage
Your poetry has potential, but I'm sure you could express your thoughts with more concrete imagery, less clichè phrases, and more umph!
Consider every word as though it may be your last. Syntax and diction are SO important!
Your fellow writer and poet,
Sage
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Thanks Sage for your critical review of my poem. I like that. Please go through all my poems posted in the forum (almost 10 of them) and let me know your opinion and critical comments.
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Fate
As the tears welled up in your eyes
A flood bust in my heart
As the water droplets touched my hands
All emotions ripped apart my soul
The quivering lips when they touched mine
All my senses took leave of me
When your clasp on my hand was like twine
My being was shaken to the core.
Not a word that I spoke
Sounded anything like m
As the tears welled up in your eyes
A flood bust in my heart
As the water droplets touched my hands
All emotions ripped apart my soul
The quivering lips when they touched mine
All my senses took leave of me
When your clasp on my hand was like twine
My being was shaken to the core.
Not a word that I spoke
Sounded anything like m
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memories of my wife- original poems from Email Removed
i kiss the cold marble
i touch your name
i cant hold you
the tears come again
when there is no tomorrow
when i walk the final lane
i'll look for you my darling
i'll find you and hold you again
tears in the night fall like rain
they sear my face
i kiss the cold marble
i touch your name
i cant hold you
the tears come again
when there is no tomorrow
when i walk the final lane
i'll look for you my darling
i'll find you and hold you again
tears in the night fall like rain
they sear my face
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thats a good poem tho a sad one... why don't you post more of your poems?
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