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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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sop
i need help for my intro line in sop
i have written as ---- can u suggest me better sentence
It has always fascinated me as to how the whole world relies extensively on the greatest source of energy that has played and is still continuing to play a very important role in every person’s life. I was also blown away/……. by the scope, existing innovations and versatility of applications of Electronics in day to day life.
i have written as ---- can u suggest me better sentence
It has always fascinated me as to how the whole world relies extensively on the greatest source of energy that has played and is still continuing to play a very important role in every person’s life. I was also blown away/……. by the scope, existing innovations and versatility of applications of Electronics in day to day life.
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It has always fascinated me how extensively the world relies on its greatest source of energy : petroleum . Do not use the rest of it. You are being too verbose.
- It has always fascinated me how extensively the world relies on its greatest source of energy : petroleum .
- Do not use the rest of it.
- You are being too verbose.
- Get to the point quickly in an SOP.
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It has always fascinated me how extensively the world relies on its greatest source of energy: petroleum.
Do not use the rest of it. You are being too verbose. Get to the point quickly in an SOP.
Do not use the rest of it. You are being too verbose. Get to the point quickly in an SOP.
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