Sono's grandmother was an enigma...
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Would you say that these lines (as the start of a short story) are natural English? Any suggestions please?
Sono's grandmother was an enigma with innumerable secrets buried in her chest—the very frail chest that was infected more often than not. Before her death, the poor lady spitted phlegm and blood morning, noon and night and was in a miserable state.
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Tom
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Mr. Tom Sono's grandmother was The reader thinks you are using the narrative past and that the old lady is still alive. Mr.
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- Tom Sono's grandmother was The reader thinks you are using the narrative past and that the old lady is still alive.
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- Tom an enigma Maybe so, but what you go on to say has nothing enigmatic about it.
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Mr. TomSono's grandmother was
The reader thinks you are using the narrative past and that the old lady is still alive.
Mr. Toman enigma
Maybe so, but what you go on to say has nothing enigmatic about it.
Mr. Tomwith innumerable secrets buried in her chest
Secrets are not n
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