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here is this sonnet I wrote I know my Iambic pentameter is off please tell me where it is off and what I should do to fix it cause I have no Idea
Who is she? Lonely, standing draped in white,
bucolic fragrance intoxicating.
Her fiery touch warms me on this cold night,
the taste of her lips, so liberating.
My infatuation never ceases.
She fills my cardiopulmonary:
it brings me comfort, fixes my pieces,
even if its only temporary.
Undeniably, lethal is her name.
Virulent devotion runs through my veins.
Lovely she is, deadliest is her game.
Now my addiction is all that remains.
Profound love is my culpability,
fatal touch is her capability.
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towel green 77 I know my Iambic pentameter is off please tell me where it is off Just about everywhere. towel green 77 what I should do to fix it cause I have no Idea Read a lot of iambic pentameter until you get the rhythm. You cannot use words that do not have the correct natural stress.
- towel green 77 I know my Iambic pentameter is off please tell me where it is off Just about everywhere.
- towel green 77 what I should do to fix it cause I have no Idea Read a lot of iambic pentameter until you get the rhythm.
- You cannot use words that do not have the correct natural stress.
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towel green 77 I know my Iambic pentameter is off please tell me where it is off
Just about everywhere.
towel green 77what I should do to fix it cause I have no Idea
Read a lot of iambic pentameter until you get the rhythm. You cannot use words that do not have the correct natural stress.
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