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Mokyk Posted 10 years ago
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Song Lyrics

Hello, Is there any mistakes? Thank you

I`m going through the city, through the forest,
Through the middle of the fire they call proof
Boiling water fills my shoes.

Yes, they are trying to shoot, but my eyes still see the truth.
  

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The only actual mistake is the use of the wrong character for the apostrophe (you typed a grave accent). Oh, and the punctuation at the end of lines seems a bit debatable and inconsistent. Beyond that, the content is not fully understandable, but song lyrics often are not.

  • The only actual mistake is the use of the wrong character for the apostrophe (you typed a grave accent).
  • Oh, and the punctuation at the end of lines seems a bit debatable and inconsistent.
  • Beyond that, the content is not fully understandable, but song lyrics often are not.
  • I would say check the word "proof" though.
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The only actual mistake is the use of the wrong character for the apostrophe (you typed a grave accent). Oh, and the punctuation at the end of lines seems a bit debatable and inconsistent.

Beyond that, the content is not fully understandable, but song lyrics often are not. I would say check the word "proof" though.

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