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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Song lyrics
Is my following song lyrics ok? I'm not a native speaker, so I'm not sure about some grammars in the song. Your help will be highly appreciated. Thank you so much.
"My Best Friend's Smile"
Oh your smile, like the beautiful sunshine
It keeps this whole word alive and warm
Wonderful things in this world are here
As the sun is still shining
But someday if you really feel so blue
Never lose hope as you'll stop smiling
And how can flowers in this world bloom
If there's no light of your smile
"My Best Friend's Smile"
Oh your smile, like the beautiful sunshine
It keeps this whole word alive and warm
Wonderful things in this world are here
As the sun is still shining
But someday if you really feel so blue
Never lose hope as you'll stop smiling
And how can flowers in this world bloom
If there's no light of your smile
Top answer
Song lyrics don't have to have perfect grammar. Your meaning is clear which is all that matters.
- Song lyrics don't have to have perfect grammar.
- Your meaning is clear which is all that matters.
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Song lyrics don't have to have perfect grammar. Your meaning is clear which is all that matters.
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Thank you so much for the reply. It's almost my bestfriend's birthday, so I wrote her this song. I hope she will like it 
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