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Saltcracker Studio Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Something's wrong, says Grammarly

He tried to lower his expectations by telling himself, that the world wouldn't be any different, that no one in the future would care about some stones that were arranged in a strange formation.

Something is wrong with this, at least that is what Grammarly said, I think that it seems okay, but I tried repeatedly to get the thing that is wrong and it seems like its something with the end of the sentence, I changed it around a couple times, but it didn't change the result. Help. ;-; (ignore all the mistakes in this lower text, cant be bothered)

  

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The first comma is incorrect and should be deleted. Otherwise, the sentence is correct English.

  • The first comma is incorrect and should be deleted.
  • Otherwise, the sentence is correct English.
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The first comma is incorrect and should be deleted. Otherwise, the sentence is correct English.

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Try removing the first comma.

If that doesn't work, try 'and' before the second 'that''.


I admire your frankness in saying you can't be bothered, but please make the effort next time!

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