Somepeople believe that school children shouldnot be given by teachers, where as others argue that homework plays an important role in the esucation of children.Disscuss both ideas and give your own opions.

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There are different ideas about whether or not give children homework.While others say that homework is crucial for student.presonally,i think it is very useless.

There are meryal reasons why somepeople think homework plays a important role.Firstly,homework encourages independent learning and problem solving of a student.Secondly, it can also develop an independent habit as children have do tasks on their own ,and if they get into a pinch ,they have to find ways to pill they out.And finally ,the most important things,practise make perfect,homework is a way for the teacher to know wheher or not the student can catch up the lessons on the class.

Despite all the avantages that homework brings out ,i steel can not stand the homework.The main reason is a merial of people think home always be an unnecessary burden of children.It does nothing to improve the improve the educatioal outcomes. Findlan ,the top international education leauge,doesn't have the setting of homework .The student of this country can easily outperform tho come from the nations where homework is norm.Finally, lots of parent complain that their child spent lots of time on school and they need time to rest after long days of studying.

To be honest, i am strongly agree with banning the setting of homework:))

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There are different ideas about whether or not teachers should give children homework.While others say that homework is crucial for the student.presonally,i think it is very useless.

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As a teacher, I can say that the students who say "homework is useless" are the students who would benefit the most from practicing their lessons at home. Your essay is the perfect example of that observation. You do not practice enough and should ask your teacher to give you extra practice to do at home. We can help by reviewing your work. Then you can improve and be the best student in your class.

There are meryal (That is not an English word.) reasons why somepeople think homework plays a important role.~~Firstly,~~ First, homework encourages independent learning and problem solving ~~of a student~~.~~Secondly~~, Second, it can also develop an independent habit as children have do tasks on their own ,and if they get into a pinch ,they (informal. DO not use informal expressions in an academic essay.) have to find ways to pill they out.And finally ,the most important things,practise make perfect,homework is a way for the teacher to know wheher or not the student can catch up the lessons on the class.

Despite all the avantages that homework brings out ,i steel (Steel is a metal. Ships are made from steel.) can not stand the homework.The main reason is a merial (That is not an English word.) of people think home always be an unnecessary burden of children.It does nothing to improve the improve the educatioal outcomes. Findlan ,the (That is not an English word.) top international education leauge,doesn't (That is not an English word.) have the setting of homework .The student of this country can easily outperform tho (That is not an English word.) come from the nations where homework is the norm.Finally, lots of parent complain that their child spent lots of time in on school and they need time to rest after long days of studying.

To be honest, i am strongly agree ("am agree" is not good English.) with banning the setting of homework:))

Somepeople believe that school children shouldnot be given by teachers, where as others argue that homework plays an important role in the esucation of children.Disscuss both ideas and give your own opions.

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