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My mother, Mary Johnson spends most of her nights working as a licensed Pratical Nurse in a ling -term care facility. She is a part time student at a community college where she plans to enroll in the associate degree nursing progrm. My mother is the grandmother of three boys, and she keeps one of them. My mother reminds me of a quiet storm because she quietly moves forward but there is no evidence that she has been there. Despite all the things she does and the gentleness of her spirit, she has an unwanted partner that goes by the name" The Silent Killer", high blood pressure.
I began my interview by asking question that I thought would be helpful in finding information about my research paper. I had three main question:How did she find out she have high blood pressure? Have she had it since her second child? and Have high blood pressure every force her to go into the hospital?
Betty's answers , " I learned I had high blood pressure when I was pregnant with my second child." I had gone for prenatal car when the doctor suspected I had high blood pressure. He told me to get plenty of rest and when I sat down to make sure my feet were elevated on a footstool. I did as the doctor instructed me to, but when I went back to the doctor for a follow up on my blood pressure and prenatal care, my blood pressure was still high and I ended up being admitted into the hospital. The hospital kept me in a dimly lit room wher it was quiet. Whenever the nurse would awaken me. I could see my food but did not remember if I had eaten it or not. When I was discharged I remember feeling as if I was a pinchushion that had been in the hospital for a couple days, but in actuality I had been in the hospital for two weeks.
After the childbirth she kept all doctor appointments because her blood pressure remained high. She is still plagued with hypertension every day; therefore she eats a low fat, low sodium diet, and keeps her weight under controll. She walkds at least three times a week and take her prescribed medication, Norvasc 10 mg once daily. " I pray to God for healing and strength." she says
Since her children's chances of getting high blood pressue is increase, she wants them to know and take the proper steps in keeping themselves health and keep their blood pressure under control. She points out how if affects the internal organs, especially the kidneys. High blood pressure can lead to end stage renal failur, stroke, or heart attack. She often brings home literature on high blood that she thinks will be helpful.

In conclusion based on the information that my mother has give me and the sources I have read, I learned a lot more than I did before the interview.