Someone to help me to correct this motivation letter (thanks a lot)

Madam,

I ‘m actually in the 4th year of my study in management at the university of xxx. In order to grow familiar with the professional activity and to apply the skill learn during the past 4 years at the university, I would like to present my collaboration as a trainee in the company xxx. With a minimum of xxx hours divide up at least x weeks, I’m able to begin this internship in the beginning of July xx. I mention that this internship will be totally covered by the insurance of my university.

Your company is well known by the student of our school. I have already made a good opinion of it by hearing other student. I have heard a lot about you activity thanks to the information avaible on the website, but with the jacket that you gives during the xxx organize by the school xxx. It’s thus with a high enthusiasm and a fully knowledge that I apply for you company.

As I’m a sociable, dynamic, creative and flexible persons, my aim is to work in the auditing sector. Finance and accounting represent to me a real centre of interest. I particularly appreciate the lecture of « xxx » gives by Mister xxx during the first semester of this academic year. This first approach of auditing and the contact that I took with other students wich are working in this sector are influencing my choice to work for xxxxx. In addition to the personal enrichment which brings this internship, I hoop to provide my enthusiasm, my flexibility and all my personal skills in a dynamic working team. Furthermore I whish to make a future career in the sector of xxx.

If you require any further information, feel free to contact me. I can be available for an interview any time at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely