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The book that I have read was the pursuit of God by A.W. Tozer the reason I have chose to read that book was because of it title caught my attention, so I have decided to read it which it turn out that I was right, and the title of this book was a perfect picked for it.
To begin I will have to say when I was reading this book I couldn't help it but feel the present of God close to me this books really spoke to me believe that when Tozer was writing this book with a very strong spirit of God. Sometimes there's question comes to mind such as is God really exist? does he Love us? Obviously reading this book answers all of those question, what I find amazing was a part that said God is the one who search for us not us but His the one who appear first to us before we even come to Him, that just amazing to know that our God want to have a close relationship with us, with all that said, we can just see the Love that He have for us, because if God did not care about us He would have not even border to searches for man, but sense His a loving God He want a strong relationship with man, so therefore knowing that God want a relationship with man it made me feel so happy to know that, with that Love when man committed sins as the Bible quoted , man basically did lost a relationship with God sin did separated us from God, since his a merciful God he decided to reunited with us by sending His son Jesus Christ to die for us, so that we can be reconnected with Him, that is love.
God can do anything for his children which we all belong to him as aFather that He his for us, that is why He love to talk to us and whenever we need him we should believe that He his there to listen. What come of my mind I thought of Paul on the Bible, Paul was known as a bad person with a bad reputation, until God appeared to Paul(Saul Act 9-3,4), and convert him to a better person, which Paul became a huge follower of God and he preaches a lot of people God worked miraculous in him, this merely show us especially me that God do not judge us or hate us but he do is all to help us to become better all we need to do is to listen to him and he will come to us, God still talk to his children till now. If God hated sinners I don't think he would even border to appear to someone like Paul, sense He love us so much He is there to talk to us to help us whenever we are walking in a wrong way with that explainable love he have that is why he do come to us. The Bible show us how God did contacted all of his children.
Also it is this one part I read on the book which just brought sadness in me was this amazing quote that said, “Christians are in real danger of losing God amid the wonders of His Word. We have almost forgot that God is a Person and, as such, can be cultivated as any person can” (Tozer, 6).
Just this little passage it spoke a lot to me seeing how especially this day people love the world and they are forgetting God's word and they are rejecting God now sad is that? And sometime I cannot help but wonder how God does feels about all this situation? What I believe what Tozer meant by saying sometimes people forget that God is a person my understanding of it is that some people just are not thinking that God exist or another is people are focusing withe mere thing and they are forgetting at least to communicate with God which is by praying and just by reading the scripture, God does not want to be ignore by us He want to speak to us which we should let him in and not reject him, If we think and believe that God is just one of us and that when we talk to him is actually there and he is listen to us that will build our relationship stronger with God because he Love us and he want to be in our life therefore we should not ignore him because he does not deserve it.
If we want God to our life we need to know he's already there all he needs from us it to open our heart and hears to let him in also to listen to him as Tozer said here, “The Bible is not an end in itself but a means to bring men to an intimate and satisfying knowledge of God, that they may enter into Him, that they may delight in His Presence, may taste and know the inner sweetness of the very God Himself in the core and center of their hearts” (Tozer, 4).
Which I believe the bible is a truly word of God therefore we cannot just read it for fun, but we should read it and meditated from it, to me personally when I read the Bible I do feel God and he bible surely help me to understand how big God is and how God been talking to man.
Over all I can't find any critic I can give to this book all I find from it by reading it seems like God was close to me, God has use Tozer to speak to us and to tell us how much God want a deep relationship with us his children, I totally enjoy it and I am thankful for the Love God have for me and also for the relationship he have with me His daughter.