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Dilshi Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
someone please please correct this paragraph
Well finally you too joined to the club of 22nds of the four craziest musketeers. (Still except Ann) So we warmly welcome you girly wishing you a marvelous year ahead with an awesome 22nd birthday.
OK fine no more official stories, let me begin in our own way. Suddenly what I remembered now was, the way you are getting ready to run to the washroom in the last 4mins of the lecture before sir leaves the hall mainly because to do your makeup! But I still wonder what are you smearing on face because that powder has already finished! Isn't it?
OK fine no more official stories, let me begin in our own way. Suddenly what I remembered now was, the way you are getting ready to run to the washroom in the last 4mins of the lecture before sir leaves the hall mainly because to do your makeup! But I still wonder what are you smearing on face because that powder has already finished! Isn't it?
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Social media sites are full of such random rambling disconnected jottings. This is no different. I am at a loss as to how you want it to read.
- Social media sites are full of such random rambling disconnected jottings.
- This is no different.
- I am at a loss as to how you want it to read.
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Social media sites are full of such random rambling disconnected jottings. This is no different. I am at a loss as to how you want it to read.
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Sorry teacher I didn't get you. It means can't you correct this paragraph if there are any wrong grametical?
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dilshiSorry teacher I didn't get you.I mean that I don't know where you will use this writing. Is it for something formal? Is it just a casual post on Facebook? Is it for a blog?
If it is for formal writing, there are a lot of mistakes, and a lot of corrections.
If it is just for something on Facebook, it does not need to be perfec
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Just to post on Facebook teacher.
Could you please check atleast below sentences. Please teacher please..
"Suddenly what I remembered now was, the way you are getting ready to run to the washroom in the last 4mins of the lecture before sir leaves the hall mainly because to do your makeup! But I still wonder what are you smearing on face because that powder has already finished!"
Could you please check atleast below sentences. Please teacher please..
"Suddenly what I remembered now was, the way you are getting ready to run to the washroom in the last 4mins of the lecture before sir leaves the hall mainly because to do your makeup! But I still wonder what are you smearing on face because that powder has already finished!"
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I'm not exactly sure if you are relating something from the past or not. I assumed that was the case.
Suddenly what I remembered now was the way you were getting ready to run to the washroom (mainly to put on your makeup) in the last 4 minutes of the lecture, before the professor left the hall. But I still wonder what you were smearing on your
Suddenly what I remembered now was the way you were getting ready to run to the washroom (mainly to put on your makeup) in the last 4 minutes of the lecture, before the professor left the hall. But I still wonder what you were smearing on your
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"When I remember your party tomorrow, I feel really sad that I won't be able come."
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It's so sad that I won't be able come to your party tomorrow. I'm really disappointed.
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It's so sad that I won't be able come to your party tomorrow. I'm really disappointed.
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Thank you so much madam! 
This forum is really helpful for us and the job doing by the panal of teachers really grateful. Cheers.
This forum is really helpful for us and the job doing by the panal of teachers really grateful. Cheers. 0
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