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Dilshi Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Someone please correct this sentence

Do remember to bring my candy parcel when you come back.
  

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It's not wrong. But ''my candy parcel' is an unusual phrase, More common is 'my bag of candy'. It's written in the form of an exclamation, so it would be good to end with an exclamation mark.

— Clive

  • It's not wrong.
  • But ''my candy parcel' is an unusual phrase, More common is 'my bag of candy'.
  • It's written in the form of an exclamation, so it would be good to end with an exclamation mark.
  • Clive
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It's not wrong.

But ''my candy parcel' is an unusual phrase, More common is 'my bag of candy'.

It's written in the form of an exclamation, so it would be good to end with an exclamation mark.

Clive
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